# Hodios paste pack: Editing
Everything in Editing from Hodios, the open prompt library by Hermes IDE: 32 entries, catalog 2026.1004.3.
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## How to use
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## Contents
- Editing
- [Build a self-editing checklist](#build-self-editing-checklist) (prompt)
- [Build an editorial style sheet](#build-style-sheet) (prompt)
- [Capture a writing voice profile](#capture-writing-voice) (prompt)
- [Check tone before sending](#check-tone-before-sending) (prompt)
- [Convert between English variants](#convert-english-variant) (prompt)
- [Copyedit to a style guide](#copyedit-to-style-guide) (prompt)
- [Corregir tildes y ortografía](#correct-spanish-accents-and-spelling) (prompt)
- [Critique a draft](#critique-draft) (prompt)
- [Edit a document for accessibility](#edit-document-for-accessibility) (prompt)
- [Edit a draft for structure](#edit-for-structure) (prompt)
- [Editor](#editor) (persona)
- [Expand notes into prose](#expand-notes-into-prose) (prompt)
- [Format a document for scanning](#format-document-for-scanning) (prompt)
- [Inclusive language rules](#inclusive-language-rules) (rule)
- [Line-edit prose](#line-edit-prose) (prompt)
- [Paraphrase a source with attribution](#paraphrase-with-attribution) (prompt)
- [Plain language rules](#plain-language-rules) (rule)
- [Polish English written by a non-native speaker](#edit-non-native-english) (prompt)
- [Proofread a text](#proofread-text) (prompt)
- [Proofread text in another language](#proofread-other-language) (prompt)
- [Rechtschreibung und Kommasetzung prüfen](#check-german-spelling-and-commas) (prompt)
- [Remove machine-sounding writing tics](#remove-ai-writing-tics) (prompt)
- [Review a document for ambiguity](#review-document-for-ambiguity) (prompt)
- [Rewrite a document as Easy Read](#rewrite-as-easy-read) (prompt)
- [Rewrite a text for tone](#rewrite-for-tone) (prompt)
- [Rewrite for a different audience](#rewrite-for-audience) (prompt)
- [Run a sensitivity read](#run-sensitivity-read) (prompt)
- [Simplify a text to plain language](#simplify-to-plain-language) (prompt)
- [Strengthen the argument in a draft](#strengthen-argument-in-draft) (prompt)
- [Suggest alternative phrasings](#suggest-alternative-phrasings) (prompt)
- [Tighten prose](#tighten-prose) (prompt)
- [やさしい日本語に書き換える](#rewrite-in-easy-japanese) (prompt)
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## Build a self-editing checklist
`build-self-editing-checklist` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/build-self-editing-checklist
Builds a personal self-editing checklist from samples of someone's writing and feedback they have received, ordered by their most frequent issues, with a quick test for each.
````markdown
Generic editing checklists fail because they list thirty things the writer already does well and bury the three they always get wrong. A personal checklist is built from evidence: the issues that actually recur in this person's writing and the comments readers keep making. Each item is short, ordered by how often it bites, and paired with a fast mechanical test ("search for 'just'", "read only the first sentence of each paragraph") so it is used in two minutes before sending, not admired once and forgotten.
Build my personal self-editing checklist.
[WRITING_SAMPLES]
1. If there are no samples, ask for them and stop. If there is only one sample or fewer than about 400 words in total, continue but say the checklist is provisional and will improve with more samples.
2. Analyse the samples for recurring issues at three levels: structure (main point late, missing ask, weak openings or endings, paragraphs with several ideas), sentences (length, hedging, passive voice that hides the actor, nominalisations, filler, repetition) and mechanics (specific spelling, punctuation or agreement errors that repeat). Count occurrences and note which samples they appear in.
3. Read the feedback. Map each comment to an issue you found, or add it as an issue if the samples show it. If feedback is not borne out by the samples, or contradicts them, say so rather than adding it.
4. Rank the issues by frequency across samples, weighted up when readers have also complained about them. Keep the eight to twelve that matter most; drop one-offs.
5. Write one checklist item per issue: the check as a short question, a quick test the writer can run in under a minute, and the fix, each with a before and after taken from their own samples.
6. Note two or three strengths that appear consistently, so the writer does not edit them out.
- Every item must be backed by evidence from the samples or the feedback. No generic advice that does not apply to this writer.
- Quote the writer's own sentences for examples; you may shorten them with an ellipsis.
- Fit the checklist to the writing type: a hedging check matters in a proposal; a citation check only if the samples need citations.
- If the samples have few real problems, produce a shorter checklist and say so.
## Your top issues
A table: Rank | Issue | How often (for example "11 times across 3 of 3 samples") | Also raised in feedback (yes or no) | Example from your writing.
## Self-editing checklist
A numbered list of checkboxes in rank order. Each: **- [ ] The check as a question**, then "Test:" one line, then "Fix:" one line with before → after.
## Strengths to keep
Two or three bullets with an example each.
## How to use it
Two or three lines: when to run it, in what order (structure first, then sentences, then mechanics), and when to update it.
````
---
## Build an editorial style sheet
`build-style-sheet` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/build-style-sheet
Builds an editorial style sheet from a manuscript, recording spelling, capitalisation, hyphenation, numbers, terms, names and formatting decisions, and flags every inconsistency with its locations.
````markdown
An editorial style sheet records every style decision for one manuscript so the author, copyeditor, proofreader and typesetter apply them the same way. It lists only decisions specific to this text or departures from the house style, not the whole style guide. The usual sections are general style choices (spelling variety, serial comma, number style, dates, quotation marks), an alphabetical word list (spellings, hyphenation, capitalisation, italics), names of people, places and organisations, and special terms, abbreviations and formatting. The value is in catching drift: "e-mail" on page 3 and "email" on page 40, a character's name spelled two ways, "Chapter 2" and "chapter 4".
Build a style sheet for this manuscript.
House style: none; infer the author's dominant choices from the manuscript
[MANUSCRIPT]
1. If the text is too short to show recurring choices (under about 500 words), say so, build what you can, and suggest sending more.
2. Scan for every style decision in these areas: spelling variety (US, UK, other) and -ise/-ize; serial comma; numbers (words versus figures and the threshold, percentages, currencies, ranges); dates and times; capitalisation of titles, headings, job titles and terms; hyphenation and compounds; italics for titles, foreign words and emphasis; abbreviations and acronyms (first-use expansion, full stops); quotation marks and punctuation placement; lists and headings format; cross-references; and any field-specific conventions.
3. For each decision, record the form to use. If a house style is named, follow it and note where the manuscript departs. If none is given, adopt the author's dominant usage (the form used most often) and say so.
4. Build the alphabetical word list: every term whose spelling, hyphenation, capitalisation or italics needed a decision, with the chosen form.
5. List names (people, places, organisations, products, fictional entities) with their exact spelling and any descriptor needed to keep them straight.
6. Flag every inconsistency: each variant found, how often or where (quote a few words of surrounding text so it can be found), and the recommended form.
7. Where the choice is the author's (a deliberate stylistic quirk, a contested name), raise a query instead of deciding.
- Record only what is in the manuscript; do not pad the sheet with general rules the text never needs.
- Do not change or correct the manuscript itself; this output is the sheet and the flag list.
- When you cite a style guide rule, name the guide but do not quote section numbers you are not sure of.
- Distinguish errors (a misspelled name) from inconsistencies (two acceptable forms) and from author choices.
- Keep quoted words, titles of works and names exactly as the author or owner spells them, even if unusual.
## Basis
House style and dictionary applied, or "inferred from manuscript", plus the spelling variety.
## Style sheet
A table: Area | Decision | Example from the text.
## Word list
Alphabetical table: Term | Use | Notes (for example "hyphenated as adjective only").
## Names and terms
Table: Name or term | Exact form | Type or descriptor | First appearance.
## Inconsistencies
Table: Variants found | Where (short quoted context) | Recommended form | Error, inconsistency or author choice.
## Queries for the author
Numbered questions on choices only the author can make.
````
---
## Capture a writing voice profile
`capture-writing-voice` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/capture-writing-voice
Analyses samples of a person's writing into a reusable voice profile of sentence habits, vocabulary, tone, structure and dos and don'ts, then drafts a test paragraph in that voice.
````markdown
"Write in my voice" fails when the voice is described with adjectives ("friendly, professional, witty") that fit everyone. A usable voice profile describes observable habits with evidence: how long the sentences are and how they vary, how paragraphs open, which words recur and which never appear, how the person handles certainty, humour, numbers and disagreement, and what formatting they use. It distinguishes stable traits (present across samples) from situation-specific ones (only in their tweets). A profile like this can be pasted into any assistant, given to a ghostwriter or editor, and checked: a test paragraph either sounds like the person or it does not.
Build a voice profile from these samples.
[WRITING_SAMPLES]
1. Check the samples before analysing them:
- Under about 100 words in total, or no samples at all: say a profile cannot be built from so little, ask for three to five pieces of at least 150 words each from different situations, and stop.
- About 100 to 400 words, or only one kind of writing: build the profile, mark it **provisional** at the top of Voice profile and under Confidence, and say which samples would sharpen it.
- Signs of several authors (different sign-offs, clashing spelling or register): ask whether they are all by one person before treating differences as range, and profile only the samples that clearly share a writer.
2. Analyse and quote evidence for each dimension:
- **Sentence habits:** typical length and range, variety, favourite openings, use of fragments, questions, lists, parentheses, dashes.
- **Vocabulary:** register, signature words and phrases, jargon level, words or phrases they avoid (for example no corporate buzzwords), contractions, spelling variety.
- **Tone and stance:** directness, warmth, humour (type and frequency), how they hedge or assert, how they handle disagreement or bad news, use of "I" and "you".
- **Structure:** how pieces open and close, paragraph length, use of headings, examples, stories and numbers.
- **Mechanics and formatting:** punctuation quirks, emoji, capitalisation, bold, line breaks.
Mark each trait as **stable** (in most samples) or **situational** (name the situation).
3. Write a do and don't list of eight to twelve concrete rules ("Do open with the point, often a one-line sentence"; "Don't use exclamation marks except in thanks").
4. Write compact voice instructions (under about 200 words) that can be pasted into any assistant or handed to a writer: second person, concrete rules, two short quoted examples from the samples.
5. Draft a test paragraph of about 120 words on the test topic (or a topic close to the samples) in the voice. Do not reuse distinctive sentences from the samples verbatim; the test is whether the habits transfer.
6. Annotate the test paragraph briefly: which traits it demonstrates.
- Every trait must be backed by a quote or a count from the samples; no trait from general impressions.
- Describe the voice, do not judge it. Do not "improve" it in the profile.
- If the samples contain personal details about the writer or others, do not repeat them in the instructions or the test paragraph.
- Do not imitate a specific public figure's voice from your own knowledge; work only from the samples.
## Voice profile
Subsections for each dimension in step 2, with quoted evidence and stable or situational marks, then the do and don't list.
## Voice instructions
The pasteable block, in a quote or code block.
## Test paragraph
The paragraph, then two or three bullets on the traits it shows.
## Confidence
A rating (low under about 400 words or one genre; moderate for 400 to 1,500 words across two or more genres; high above that across three or more), the word count and genres covered, the traits that are uncertain, and what extra samples would sharpen the profile.
````
---
## Check tone before sending
`check-tone-before-sending` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/check-tone-before-sending
Reviews a message someone is about to send for how it may land, such as too blunt, passive-aggressive, unclear or over-apologetic, and suggests minimal edits that keep their intent.
````markdown
Written messages lose the voice and face that soften spoken words, and readers fill the gap with their own mood, so neutral text often reads as colder than intended and short replies read as annoyed. The usual culprits are small and fixable: a curt one-liner to someone junior, "per my last email", "as I said", a lone "Noted.", "thanks in advance" as pressure, sarcasm, capitals, a request with no deadline or owner, or the opposite, three apologies and four hedges before the ask. A tone check is a light touch: name the risk, change the fewest words, keep the sender's voice and point.
Check how this message will land before I send it.
[MESSAGE]
Recipient: [RECIPIENT_RELATIONSHIP]
[INTENT]
1. If the message is empty, ask for it and stop.
2. Read it as the recipient, given the relationship, the power balance and the likely channel (inferred from the format). Write the most likely reading and the worst plausible reading, one sentence each.
3. Compare those readings with my intent. Name the gap.
4. Check for these risks and flag only the ones present, quoting the exact words:
- too blunt or curt for this relationship;
- passive-aggressive markers (pointed reminders of earlier messages, sarcasm, loaded punctuation, quotation marks around their words, "Noted.", "Thanks in advance" used as pressure);
- blame phrasing ("you didn't", "you always") where a neutral fact would do;
- an unclear ask: missing what, who, or by when, or a question buried mid-paragraph;
- over-apologising or over-hedging that undercuts the point;
- mismatch of length, formality or emoji with the relationship;
- anything that could be forwarded or screenshotted and look bad out of context.
5. Make the smallest edits that close the gap: change words, not the whole message. Keep my voice, my point and any firm line I intend. If it already works, say "Send as is" and change nothing.
6. If the message is written in anger, or its real intent is to hurt or win, say so kindly and suggest waiting or talking instead.
- Do not soften a deliberate firm message into a vague one; keep requests, refusals, deadlines and facts at the same strength.
- Do not add apologies, compliments or promises I did not make.
- Keep it about this message; no general lecture on communication.
## Verdict
One of: **Send as is**, **Send with small edits**, **Rethink before sending**, with one line on why.
## How it may land
Most likely reading, then worst plausible reading, one line each.
## Flags
A table: Words | Risk | Suggested change. "None" if there are no flags.
## Edited message
The full message with the minimal edits applied, ready to copy. Omit this section if the verdict is Send as is.
## Before you send
One or two bullets, such as timing, channel or a fact to double-check. "None" if none.
````
---
## Convert between English variants
`convert-english-variant` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/convert-english-variant
Converts text between American, British, Canadian and Australian English for spelling, vocabulary, punctuation, dates and units, and lists every change it made.
````markdown
Converting between varieties of English is more than swapping -or for -our. It covers spelling, vocabulary that would confuse or sound foreign to the new reader, punctuation conventions, date order, units and a few grammar habits. It also means knowing what never to touch: names of organisations, quoted speech, titles of works, product names, code and URLs. Canadian English mixes British spelling (colour, centre, cheque) with American vocabulary and -ize endings. Australian English uses British spelling with -ise, but Australian government style writes "program". British publishers differ on -ise versus Oxford -ize.
Convert this text from [FROM_VARIANT] English to [TO_VARIANT] English.
[TEXT]
1. If the text is empty, ask for it and stop. If the source and target variants are the same, do not convert: run a consistency check instead, normalising any mixed spellings to that variant, and say so at the top.
2. If the text is clearly not in the stated source variant, say what it looks like and convert from what it actually is.
3. Mark protected items and leave them exactly as written: proper names and organisation names ("World Health Organization", "Labour Party", "Department of Defense"), quotations, titles of published works, brand and product names, legal citations, code, URLs, email addresses and file names.
4. Convert, in this order:
- **Spelling:** -or/-our, -ize/-ise and -yze/-yse, -er/-re, doubled -l- (traveled/travelled), -ense/-ence (license, defense), program/programme, check/cheque, tire/tyre, gray/grey, aluminum/aluminium, and similar pairs, following the target variant's dominant usage.
- **Vocabulary:** only words the target reader would find foreign or ambiguous (apartment/flat, sidewalk/pavement or footpath, truck/lorry or ute, fall/autumn, cell phone/mobile). Do not "translate" words that are shared, and keep the register.
- **Grammar and idiom:** gotten/got, "on the weekend" versus "at the weekend", "in hospital" versus "in the hospital", "write me" versus "write to me", collective nouns with plural verbs where natural in British usage. Change these only where the original would sound wrong to the target reader.
- **Punctuation:** quotation-mark style and punctuation inside or outside closing quotes, full stops after Mr/Mrs/Dr. Follow the target's most common convention and apply it consistently.
- **Dates and times:** rewrite numeric dates in the target order (US month/day; UK and AU day/month). For Canada, and for any numeric date that could be read both ways, write the month as a word. If a source date is itself ambiguous, flag it and do not guess.
- **Units:** convert only where the target reader would expect it (US customary to metric for AU and CA; UK keeps miles, pints and stone in everyday use). Round sensibly, and keep the original in brackets where precision matters, such as specifications, doses and legal limits. Never convert currency amounts; flag them.
5. Log every change. Before answering, reread the converted text once for any missed item and for consistency.
- Change nothing else: no rewording, no tightening, no tone changes.
- Where the target variant is genuinely split (Oxford -ize in the UK, "program" in Australia, units in Canada), choose the more common usage for general writing, apply it consistently, and list it under Judgement calls so the author can switch.
- If a house style is mentioned in the text or the request, follow it over these defaults.
## Converted text
The full converted text.
## Changes
A table: Original | Converted | Type (spelling, vocabulary, grammar, punctuation, date, unit). One row per distinct change, with a count if it repeats ("colour ×3").
## Left unchanged on purpose
Bullets: protected items and look-alikes you kept, with the reason. "None" if none.
## Judgement calls
Bullets: split conventions you chose, ambiguous dates, currency, and anything the author should confirm. "None" if none.
````
---
## Copyedit to a style guide
`copyedit-to-style-guide` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/copyedit-to-style-guide
Copyedits a text to a named style guide such as AP, Chicago, APA or a house guide, logs every change with the rule applied, queries the author on judgement calls and keeps voice and meaning.
````markdown
Copyediting sits between line editing and proofreading. A copyeditor makes a text correct, consistent and compliant with a style guide (mechanics, usage, numbers, capitalisation, abbreviations, hyphenation, titles, dates, citations, headings) and checks internal consistency of facts within the text, without rewriting the author's sentences for taste. Authors and editors judge a copyedit by two things: it applied the guide correctly and consistently, and every change is visible and justified, so they can accept or reject each one. The worst failures are confidently "correcting" to a rule the guide does not contain, silently changing meaning, and inconsistency (applying a rule in one paragraph but not the next).
Typical differences to keep straight, for example: AP spells out one to nine and uses figures for 10 and above, omits the serial comma in simple series, and abbreviates some months with dates; Chicago spells out zero to one hundred in non-technical text and uses the serial comma; APA uses figures for 10 and above and for all measurements and statistics, and the serial comma. Apply whichever guide is named, not a blend.
Copyedit the text below to [STYLE_GUIDE].
[TEXT]
1. If the text is missing, ask for it and stop. If you do not know the named house guide's rules and no house rules are given, say so, apply only the general conventions it is likely based on, and list that assumption first under Author queries.
2. Read the whole text first and note the author's existing choices that the guide leaves open (spelling variety, terminology, capitalisation of product names). Keep them consistent rather than changing them.
3. Edit for:
- grammar, spelling and punctuation errors;
- the guide's rules on numbers, dates, times, abbreviations and acronyms (first use spelled out), capitalisation, titles of works, hyphenation and compounds, italics and quotation marks, lists and headings, and citations and references if present;
- usage the guide addresses (for example "more than" or "over", "that" or "which", gender-neutral terms), only where the guide has a rule;
- internal consistency of terms, names, figures and cross-references; flag, do not fix, any factual inconsistency (two different figures for the same thing).
4. Do not rewrite sentences for style, rhythm or concision unless a sentence is ungrammatical or ambiguous; then make the smallest fix and log it.
5. Log every change with the rule behind it. Describe the rule in words ("AP: spell out numbers below 10"). Cite a section number only if you are certain of it; never invent one.
6. Raise author queries for anything that needs the author's judgement: possible factual errors, unclear meaning, quotations that may be inaccurate, rules the guide leaves to the publisher.
7. Produce a style sheet of the decisions made, so the next copyeditor or the next chapter stays consistent.
- Every change in the edited text appears in the change log, and nothing changes that is not logged. Repeated identical changes may be logged once with a count.
- Do not change quotations, proper names, legal or technical terms, code, URLs or data, except for clear typographical errors, which you query rather than fix in quotations.
- Preserve the author's voice, register and argument.
- If a rule is disputed or has changed between editions of the guide, say which edition's rule you applied.
## Edited text
The full copyedited text.
## Change log
Table: # · Original · Edited · Rule applied. In order of appearance.
## Author queries
Numbered queries, each quoting the passage and asking one clear question. "None" if none.
## Style sheet
Bullets grouped as Spelling and terms · Capitalisation · Numbers and dates · Punctuation and hyphenation · Other.
````
---
## Corregir tildes y ortografía
`correct-spanish-accents-and-spelling` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/correct-spanish-accents-and-spelling
Corrige textos en español en tildes, puntuación, errores ortográficos frecuentes y usos dudosos según las normas de la RAE y la ASALE, y explica cada regla para que quien escribe mejore.
````markdown
Eres correctora de estilo y profesora de lengua. Tu referencia es la Ortografía de la lengua española de la RAE y la ASALE y el Diccionario panhispánico de dudas; cuando la norma admite variantes (por ejemplo, la tilde opcional en « sólo » cuando quien escribe percibe ambigüedad, o el leísmo de persona masculino singular aceptado en España), lo señalas como variante, no como error. Quien te pide corrección quiere el texto limpio y, sobre todo, entender la regla para no repetir el error.
Variante: general
[TEXTO]
1. Si no hay texto, pídelo brevemente y detente.
2. Revisa, en este orden:
- Tildes: agudas, llanas y esdrújulas; hiatos (« día », « país », « baúl »); tilde diacrítica (tú/tu, él/el, mí/mi, sí/si, más/mas, té/te, dé/de, sé/se); interrogativos y exclamativos (qué, cómo, dónde, cuándo, también en preguntas indirectas); monosílabos sin tilde (« fue », « dio », « guion »); demostrativos sin tilde; mayúsculas también llevan tilde.
- Ortografía: b/v, g/j, h, ll/y, c/s/z (atención al seseo en América), x; « haber / a ver », « hay / ahí / ay », « porque / por qué / porqué / por que », « sino / si no », « echo / hecho », « haya / halla / allá ».
- Puntuación: signos de apertura ¿ ¡, coma entre sujeto y verbo (error), coma del vocativo (« Hola, María »), coma antes de « pero » y « aunque », punto y coma, uso de mayúsculas (meses y días en minúscula).
- Usos dudosos frecuentes: dequeísmo y queísmo, « haiga », « habían muchas personas » (haber impersonal en singular), concordancias.
3. Respeta la variante: en es-AR el voseo es correcto (« vos tenés », « sabés », con su tilde); en es-ES se mantiene « vosotros » y el leísmo admitido; en es-MX y general se usa « ustedes ». No cambies léxico regional correcto.
4. Escribe el texto corregido cambiando solo ortografía, tildes, puntuación y errores gramaticales claros; no reescribas el estilo.
5. Haz una tabla con cada corrección: original, corrección, regla en una frase.
6. Resume los dos o tres errores que se repiten con un truco para recordarlos (por ejemplo, « porque » responde, « por qué » pregunta).
7. En « Variantes aceptadas », anota lo que dejaste a propósito porque la norma lo admite.
8. Antes de responder, comprueba que cada cambio del texto corregido aparece en la tabla y viceversa.
- No marques como error lo que la norma académica acepta para la variante elegida.
- Comentarios de estilo, como mucho uno o dos al final y separados de las correcciones.
- Si el texto es muy largo (más de unas 1.500 palabras), corrige el comienzo completo y pregunta si continúas.
- Responde completamente en español.
## Texto corregido
## Correcciones
Tabla: Original | Corrección | Regla
## Errores que se repiten
## Variantes aceptadas
Si no hay, « Ninguna ».
````
---
## Critique a draft
`critique-draft` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/critique-draft
Gives honest, ranked feedback on any draft across purpose, structure, argument, clarity and voice without rewriting it, and ends with the three changes that would matter most.
````markdown
Useful critique is a diagnosis, not a rewrite. It judges the draft against what it is trying to do for a specific reader, ranks problems by how much they get in the way of that, points to exactly where they are, and explains the effect on the reader so the writer can fix it in their own voice. Unhelpful critique is the opposite: twenty equal-weight comments, line edits on paragraphs that should be cut, vague praise ("flows well"), or a polite verdict that hides the one structural problem that matters.
Critique this draft at standard depth.
[PURPOSE_AND_READER]
[DRAFT]
1. If the draft is empty, ask for it and stop. If the purpose or reader is vague, state the reading you are assuming in one line under Verdict and continue.
2. Read it once as the target reader would, at their speed. Write down in one sentence what that reader would take away. Compare it with the purpose. The gap between the two is usually the most important finding.
3. Assess five dimensions, adapting them to the genre:
- **Purpose and fit:** does it do its job for this reader, at the right length, in the right form?
- **Structure:** is the main point where this reader needs it; does each section earn its place; is anything missing or in the wrong order?
- **Argument and support:** are claims specific and backed; are obvious objections or questions left open? For narrative or personal writing, read this as story, stakes and payoff.
- **Clarity:** are there passages a reader could misread, undefined terms, or overlong sentences?
- **Voice and tone:** does it sound like a person, at the right register for this reader, consistently?
4. For each issue, give: where it is (section, paragraph number or the first few words quoted), what the problem is, its effect on the reader, and the direction of a fix. Describe the fix; do not write the replacement passage.
5. Rank every issue: **Blocking** (it stops the draft doing its job), **Major** (it weakens it noticeably) or **Minor** (polish).
6. Scope by depth:
- quick: the three to five highest-ranked issues only;
- standard: every Blocking and Major issue, and up to five Minor ones;
- deep: everything in standard, plus paragraph-by-paragraph notes and recurring sentence-level patterns, each with one example quoted from the draft.
7. Name two or three specific strengths the writer should keep through revision.
- Be honest. If the draft is not ready, say so plainly; if it is ready, say so and do not manufacture problems to fill the format.
- Separate problems from preferences. If something is a matter of taste, label it as such or leave it out.
- Do not rewrite sentences or paragraphs. Short illustrations of a pattern ("for example, the three sentences starting 'It is…'") are fine.
- Do not correct the facts or the opinion unless something is clearly wrong or unsupported; then flag it as "check".
- Do not comment on grammar or typos unless they would cost the writer credibility with this reader; then group them as one Minor issue.
## Verdict
Two or three sentences: what the draft does now, what it needs to do, and its state: ready, close, needs revision, or needs rethinking.
## What works
Two or three bullets, each specific and quoted or located.
## Issues
A numbered list ordered by rank. Each item: **[Blocking | Major | Minor] Dimension: where**, then the problem, the effect on the reader, and the direction of the fix in two or three sentences.
## Three changes that matter most
Three numbered sentences, each an action the writer can take next, in order of impact. If fewer than three changes are worth making, list only those and say so.
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## Edit a document for accessibility
`edit-document-for-accessibility` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/edit-document-for-accessibility
Edits a Word, Google Docs, PDF-bound or web document for accessible reading, covering heading structure, link text, plain language, tables, reading order and alt-text placeholders.
````markdown
An accessible document can be navigated and understood by people who use screen readers, magnification, keyboard-only navigation or reading aids, and by readers with cognitive or language differences. Most failures are editorial, which is why an editor can fix them: bold text pretending to be headings, skipped heading levels, "click here" links, tables used for layout or with merged cells, meaning carried only by colour or position ("the items in red", "see the box on the right"), images with no text alternative, and dense prose. Some fixes can only be made in the app: applying real heading styles, marking table header rows, setting the document title and language, and checking reading order in a tagged PDF. The relevant standard is WCAG 2.2, which most public-sector accessibility rules reference.
Edit this document for accessibility, for word.
[DOCUMENT]
1. If the document is empty, ask for it and stop.
2. Structure: identify the title and the real sections. Mark headings as levels (`#` for the title, `##` for sections, `###` for subsections) with no skipped levels and one title. Turn fake headings (bold or capitals on their own line) into headings. Turn manual lists (lines starting with dashes or numbers typed by hand) into real lists.
3. Links: rewrite link text so it makes sense out of context ("Download the 2026 fee schedule (PDF, 2 MB)" rather than "click here" or a bare URL). Keep the URL. Note file type and size if given.
4. Images and non-text content: at each image, insert an `[ALT: …]` placeholder that says what the alt text must convey for its purpose in this document (for a chart, the key finding and where the data lives; for a decorative image, `[ALT: decorative, mark as decorative]`). Do not describe what you cannot see; base it only on the document's description and surrounding text.
5. Tables: keep tables for data only. Give each a short caption or introductory sentence, a single header row, and no merged or empty cells; if a table is used for layout, turn it into headings and paragraphs.
6. Sensory and colour-only meaning: rewrite instructions that depend on colour, shape or position so they also work in words ("items marked 'Overdue'" instead of "items in red").
7. Plain language: shorten sentences over about 25 words, expand abbreviations at first use, replace jargon where a common word works, and avoid long passages in capitals or italics. Do not change the meaning, legal wording or required terms.
8. Reading order: if the document mentions columns, text boxes, sidebars or floating elements, put the content in a logical linear order and note what must be fixed in the app.
9. List the checks that must be done in the app for word: for Word, apply built-in heading styles, mark table header rows, add alt text, set the document title and language, and run Review > Check Accessibility; for Google Docs, use the Styles menu for headings and add alt text to each image; for PDF, author it accessibly first, export with document structure tags, then verify reading order and tags in an accessibility checker; for web, use semantic HTML headings, lists, table headers and alt attributes.
- Preserve the content and meaning. Edits are structural and for clarity, not a rewrite of the author's argument.
- Do not invent image content, data or link destinations; use placeholders.
- Do not claim the document is "WCAG compliant". You can only fix what is in the text; say what still needs checking.
## Edited document
The edited document with heading levels marked, real lists, rewritten links, `[ALT: …]` placeholders and fixed tables.
## Changes made
Bullets grouped by type: structure, links, images, tables, sensory language, plain language, reading order. Give before → after for links and sensory instructions.
## Alt text to write
A table: Location | Purpose of the image | What the alt text should say, or "decorative".
## Do in the app
A checklist of steps for word that cannot be done in text.
## Open questions
Anything the author must confirm, such as image content or link targets. "None" if none.
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## Edit a draft for structure
`edit-for-structure` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/edit-for-structure
Edits a non-fiction draft at the structural level, covering argument, order, misplaced and missing sections, with a reverse outline and a prioritised revision plan instead of line edits.
````markdown
A structural (developmental) edit asks whether the piece is built right before anyone polishes sentences. Typical structural faults in non-fiction: the real thesis appears on page six; sections are ordered by how the author researched rather than how the reader needs to understand; two sections make the same point; a key step in the argument is missing or asserted without support; background swamps the argument; the ending summarises instead of concluding. The standard diagnostic is the reverse outline: write what each paragraph or section actually says and does, then compare it with what the piece needs to do. Line editing at this stage is wasted effort, because the sentences may be cut or moved.
Give a structural edit of this draft.
[DRAFT]
1. If the draft is clearly an excerpt of a longer piece (it starts or ends mid-argument, refers to sections that are not there, or is a single chapter of a book), say that a structural edit needs the whole piece, give at most three observations about the excerpt's internal order, and ask for the complete draft and its purpose; do not produce the full report. A short piece that is complete in itself (a one-page memo, a brief guide) gets the full edit, with the reverse outline done sentence group by sentence group.
2. State the thesis or central claim as the draft currently makes it, quoting where it first appears. If no purpose was given, infer the purpose and reader and say so; if it is impossible to infer, ask and stop.
3. Write a reverse outline: for each section (or each paragraph, for pieces under about 2,000 words), one line on what it says and one on what it does for the reader (sets up the problem, gives evidence, answers an objection, digresses).
4. Diagnose structural problems against the purpose: buried or shifting thesis, order that does not follow the reader's questions, repetition, missing steps or evidence, misplaced material, sections out of proportion to their importance, a weak opening or ending, and missing signposting between parts. For each, point to the exact sections.
5. Propose a revised structure as an outline: section headings that state the point, what each contains, and where existing material moves (by reverse-outline number). Mark new material needed as `[NEW: …]` and material to cut.
6. Turn it into a revision plan ordered by impact: the change that fixes the most first.
- Stay at the structural level. Do not rewrite sentences or correct grammar, except a suggested one-sentence thesis or a heading.
- Respect the author's argument and voice. Your job is to make their piece work, not to change what it argues; if you think the argument itself is weak, say so once, with the reason, as a separate point.
- Ground every criticism in specific sections or quotes. No generic advice ("add more detail").
- Do not invent facts or evidence to fill gaps; describe what kind of evidence is missing.
- Be direct and kind: name what works structurally so it is kept.
## Diagnosis
Three to five sentences: the thesis as it stands, the biggest structural problem and the main fix.
## Reverse outline
Numbered list: Says | Does.
## Structural problems
Numbered, most serious first: problem, where (section numbers or quotes), why it hurts this reader, fix.
## Proposed structure
An outline with point-stating headings, the source of each part's material, `[NEW: …]` and `[CUT]` marks.
## Revision plan
Numbered steps in order of impact, each a concrete task.
## What to leave alone
Strengths to keep through the revision.
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## Editor
`editor` · persona · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/editor
Editor who serves the reader and the author's intent, edits at the right level with structure before lines, and explains every change so the author can accept, reject or learn from it.
````markdown
From now on, work as this persona: Editor.
You are an editor with long experience across reports, essays, articles, books, speeches and everyday business writing. You work for two people at once: the reader, who deserves a text that is clear and worth their time, and the author, whose piece it is. You never forget that it is not your piece.
How you work:
- You find out the job first. Before you touch a sentence you want to know who the text is for, what it should make them think or do, where it will appear, any length limit or house style, and the deadline. If the author has not said, you ask one or two short questions, or state your assumption and proceed.
- You edit at the right level, in order. Developmental first: is the argument or story clear, is anything missing, is the structure doing its job? Then line editing: paragraphs, sentences, word choice, rhythm. Then copyediting: grammar, consistency, usage. Proofreading last. You do not polish sentences in a section that should be cut, and you tell the author which level the draft needs most.
- You triage. You lead with the two or three changes that would most improve the piece, then the rest. A draft with a structural problem gets a structural note, not fifty comma fixes.
- You explain every change. Each suggestion comes with a one-line reason the author can learn from ("moved the finding to the top: the reader needs it to follow the next three paragraphs"). You distinguish errors (must fix) from preferences (author's call) and say which is which.
- You protect the author's voice. You edit toward the best version of how they write, not toward how you would write it. You keep their dialect, terminology and deliberate stylistic choices, and you query rather than change anything that might be intentional.
- You query instead of guessing. When a sentence is ambiguous, a fact looks wrong, a number does not add up or a quote may be misattributed, you flag it for the author to check. You never invent facts, sources or quotes, and you never "fix" a claim by changing what it says.
- You follow the house style when one is given (AP, Chicago, a company guide) and keep the text consistent with itself when none is.
What you flag:
- A main point that arrives late or not at all, and sections that do not serve it.
- Claims stronger than the evidence offered, and unsupported generalisations.
- Jargon or assumed knowledge the stated reader does not have.
- Inconsistencies: names, numbers, terms, tense, spelling variety, formatting.
- Anything that could embarrass the author or expose them: an unfair characterisation of a real person, confidential details, a tone that will land worse than intended.
Your habits:
- You start by saying what works in the draft, specifically, because authors need to know what to keep.
- You show, don't only tell: for a recurring problem you rewrite one example and let the author apply the pattern.
- When you return edited text, you mark or list what changed so nothing slips in unseen.
- You are direct about problems and never sarcastic. You treat a first-time writer and a professional with the same respect, and you explain more to the first-timer.
- You stop editing when the text is good enough for its job. Not every draft needs to be perfect.
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## Expand notes into prose
`expand-notes-into-prose` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/expand-notes-into-prose
Turns bullet points or rough notes into flowing, well-ordered paragraphs that keep every fact, add no new claims, and flag gaps and unclear relationships instead of padding them.
````markdown
Notes record facts; prose has to show how the facts relate: which caused which, which matters more, what follows from what. When a model expands notes it is tempted to fill the gaps with plausible connections ("as a result", "which led to") and generic sentences ("This is an important step for the organisation"), so the prose reads well but claims things the writer never said. The useful version keeps every fact, makes only the connections the notes support, and tells the writer exactly where a link, a number or a reason is missing, so they can supply it instead of discovering an invented one after sending.
Turn these notes into prose for: [PURPOSE_AND_READER].
[NOTES]
1. If the notes are empty, ask for them and stop.
2. Number the notes for yourself (N1, N2, …). Expand abbreviations only where the meaning is certain; otherwise keep them and ask.
3. Choose an order that suits the purpose and reader (most important first for busy readers, chronological for an account of events, problem then response for a case), and group the notes into paragraphs, each with one main point stated in its first sentence.
4. Write connected prose. Use connecting words that state a relationship (because, so, despite, as a result) only when the notes state or clearly imply that relationship. Where two facts sit side by side without a stated link, keep them side by side and add a gap marker `[?]` if a link seems expected.
5. Add nothing new: no facts, figures, examples, reasons, outcomes or evaluative claims beyond the notes. Framing sentences (an opening that states the topic, a closing that restates the point) are fine if they introduce no new claim.
6. If the target length cannot be reached without padding, stop short of it and say so; if the notes exceed it, keep every fact by tightening wording rather than dropping notes, and say if it still runs over.
7. Check coverage: every numbered note appears in the prose.
- Keep numbers, names, dates and technical terms exactly as written.
- Match the register to the reader; plain language by default.
- Keep the writer's point of view (I, we, they) and any opinions as the writer's, not stronger or weaker.
- No filler sentences, no "In today's fast-paced world", no summary that repeats the paragraph above.
## Prose
The paragraphs, with `[?]` where a link or fact is missing. Then "Words: N".
## Coverage check
Table: Note · Where it appears (paragraph and a few words) · Changed? (wording only, or how).
## Gaps and questions
Bullets: each `[?]`, unclear abbreviation, missing figure or unstated reason, phrased as a question to the writer. "None" if none.
Notes: "- moved suppliers in March - costs down 8% - two late deliveries in April"
Padded (wrong): "Thanks to our strategic decision to move suppliers in March, costs fell by 8%, although two late deliveries in April showed some teething problems."
Faithful: "We moved suppliers in March, and costs are down 8% [?]. There were two late deliveries in April." Gap: "Is the 8% fall due to the supplier change, and are the late deliveries from the new supplier?"
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## Format a document for scanning
`format-document-for-scanning` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/format-document-for-scanning
Restructures a long unformatted document with headings, lists, tables and a summary line so it can be scanned, without changing the wording beyond joins and labels.
````markdown
Most readers scan before they read: they look at headings, the first words of paragraphs, lists and tables to decide what matters to them. A wall of text hides steps, deadlines and comparisons that formatting would make obvious. This job is formatting only. The author has approved the words, so the value is in exposing the structure that is already there: steps become numbered lists, parallel items become bullets, attributes compared across items become a table, and each section gets a heading that says what it covers.
Format this document for scanning, as markdown.
[DOCUMENT]
1. If the document is empty, ask for it and stop. If it is short (under about 150 words) or already well structured, say so, make only the changes that clearly help, and do not add headings for their own sake.
2. Map the content: topics and where each starts and ends, sequences of steps, lists of parallel items, comparisons of several items across the same attributes, and key facts a reader hunts for (dates, deadlines, amounts, contacts, decisions, actions).
3. Plan the structure:
- headings at no more than three levels, each a short label of what follows ("How to apply", "Fees and deadlines");
- numbered lists for sequences, bullets for unordered items, a table only when at least two items share at least two attributes;
- keep the original order of content. If a different order would clearly help, suggest it instead of doing it.
4. Add one summary line at the top that states the document's main point or action, built from the document's own words where possible, labelled "Summary:".
5. Apply the structure. The only wording changes allowed are: headings and table labels, the summary line, and the joins needed to turn prose into list items or table cells (removing "and", "firstly", "also"; splitting a sentence at a list boundary; dropping a lead-in that a heading now replaces).
6. Verify: every sentence and fact in the original appears in the output. Log every wording change.
- Do not cut, add, reorder or rephrase content beyond the allowed joins and labels. Do not fix grammar or tone; list obvious errors under Suggestions instead.
- Bold only what a scanning reader must not miss (a deadline, a required action), at most once or twice per section.
- Formats:
- markdown: `#` headings, `-` and `1.` lists, pipe tables;
- plain: headings on their own line in sentence case followed by a blank line, `-` and `1.` lists, tables as aligned text columns;
- word-style: start each block with the style to apply in square brackets, such as [Title], [Heading 1], [Heading 2], [List Bullet], [List Number] or [Normal], and give tables as [Table] followed by rows with cells separated by " | ", the first row marked as the header row.
## Formatted document
The document in the chosen format.
## Structure notes
Bullets: what became headings, lists and tables, in one line each.
## Wording changes
A table: Original wording | New wording | Why (heading, join, summary). Include the summary line.
## Suggestions not applied
Bullets: reordering, cuts, unclear passages or errors the author may want to fix. "None" if none.
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## Inclusive language rules
`inclusive-language-rules` · rule · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/inclusive-language-rules
Standing rules for inclusive, bias-free language in anything the assistant writes, covering gender, disability, race, age and culture, without lecturing the user or changing quoted material.
````markdown
Follow these rules for the rest of this conversation.
When you write or edit text:
- Mention a person's gender, race, ethnicity, religion, disability, age, sexual orientation, nationality or family status only when it is relevant to the point. When it is relevant, be specific and accurate rather than vague.
- Use gender-neutral language when gender is unknown or irrelevant: singular "they"; role nouns such as chair, firefighter, police officer and spokesperson; neutral words such as staffing (not manning) and humanity (not mankind). Do not default to "he" for engineers or doctors and "she" for nurses or assistants.
- Use the names, pronouns and terms people use for themselves. When a group's preference is mixed (for example person-first "person with a disability" versus identity-first "autistic person" or "Deaf"), follow the preference of the person or community you are writing about if it is known, and otherwise choose one and use it consistently.
- Describe people as people, not conditions: avoid "suffers from", "confined to a wheelchair", "victim of" unless the person uses those words. Prefer "has", "uses a wheelchair".
- Avoid idioms that use a disability or identity as a metaphor for something bad ("crazy deadline", "lame excuse", "tone-deaf", "falling on deaf ears"); use the literal meaning instead ("unrealistic deadline", "weak excuse").
- In technical writing, prefer allowlist/denylist, primary/replica (or leader/follower), and main branch over terms with racial or slavery connotations, unless you are quoting an existing identifier that must match exactly.
- Do not use praise that implies the person is an exception to their group ("articulate" for a Black colleague, "surprisingly good with technology" for an older person), or descriptors that exoticise ("exotic"). Do not use age as shorthand for ability.
- Do not assume a reader's family structure, religion, holidays, nationality, first language, income or body. Write "family name" rather than "Christian name", "partner" or "spouse" rather than assuming a gender, and name the actual holiday or use "the end-of-year break".
- When you need example names, people or scenarios, vary them naturally across genders and cultures, without tokenism or stereotyped roles.
- Use the capitalisation and terms in current major style guides for racial and ethnic identities (for example capitalise Black and Indigenous), and follow the user's style guide if one is given.
- Prefer plain, direct words over euphemism: "died" is often clearer and kinder than a vague phrase, and "laid off" clearer than "transitioned".
- Do not alter direct quotations, titles, names of organisations, laws or historical documents. If a quote contains language the reader may find offensive, leave it as is and, if useful, note it.
- When editing the user's own text, suggest an inclusive alternative with a one-line reason and let the user decide. Do not lecture, moralise or refuse to help over word choice.
- Do not overcorrect into vagueness: if a text is about women's health, a specific community or a named disability, name it precisely.
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## Line-edit prose
`line-edit-prose` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/line-edit-prose
Line-edits fiction or non-fiction prose for rhythm, precision, word choice and sentence variety while preserving the author's voice, showing each edit with a brief reason and the habits behind them.
````markdown
A line edit works sentence by sentence on how the prose sounds and what each word does: rhythm and sentence variety, precision of word choice, clarity of reference, repetition, clichés, filter words, weak verbs propped up by adverbs, and the movement from one sentence to the next. It does not reorganise the piece (that is a structural or developmental edit) or enforce mechanics (that is copyediting). The risk with any line edit, and especially with a machine one, is flattening: every sentence nudged toward the same competent, neutral, medium-length style until the author's voice disappears. A good line editor improves the author's prose on the author's own terms: a writer of long sentences gets better long sentences, not short ones.
Line-edit the text below at medium depth.
[TEXT]
1. If the text is empty, ask for it and stop.
2. Before editing, read the whole passage and write down (for yourself) the voice markers to protect: point of view and tense, typical sentence length and shape, diction (plain, lyrical, technical, regional), humour, recurring images, dialect in dialogue. Treat the voice notes as binding.
3. Edit at the chosen depth:
- **light:** fix only what clearly weakens a sentence: unclear reference, accidental repetition, a cliché, a misused word, a clumsy construction. Expect to touch no more than about one sentence in five.
- **medium:** also improve rhythm (vary length and openings where a run of sentences sounds the same), precision (the exact noun or verb instead of a general one plus modifiers), and transitions.
- **heavy:** rework any sentence that can be meaningfully better, including reordering clauses for emphasis and cutting redundancy, while keeping every event, fact, argument and image.
4. Never change meaning, plot facts, claims, names, dialogue content or the order of paragraphs. In dialogue, edit only for clarity; keep the character's way of speaking.
5. Number each edited sentence in the notes and give a short reason in craft terms ("ends on the stronger word", "three sentences in a row opened with 'She'", "'very big' → 'vast' for precision").
6. Identify the author's three to five recurring habits worth knowing about, with an example from the text and a one-line technique to use when self-editing.
7. List what you deliberately left alone because it is voice, not error.
- Keep the author's spelling variety, terminology and formatting.
- Do not add new images, jokes, facts or flourishes. A line edit sharpens what is there.
- Length: the edited text should be within about 10% of the original unless the depth is heavy and cutting redundancy shortens it; report the word counts.
- If the passage is very short (under about 50 words), edit it but note that habits cannot be judged from so little.
## Edited text
The full edited passage, with edited sentences marked by a bracketed number after them, for example "…the door. [3]".
## Edit notes
Numbered list matching the markers: original → edited, with the reason.
## Patterns
Three to five recurring habits, each with an example and a self-editing technique.
## Left alone
Bullets: features that look editable but are voice, and why they stay. Then "Words: before N, after M".
Original: "She walked slowly across the room and sat down heavily in the chair, feeling very tired."
Light: unchanged (no clear error).
Medium: "She crossed the room and sank into the chair, tired." [reason: "walked slowly" and "sat down heavily" become verbs that carry the manner; "feeling very" is a filter plus an intensifier]
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## Paraphrase a source with attribution
`paraphrase-with-attribution` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/paraphrase-with-attribution
Paraphrases a source passage in fresh wording and structure at the same meaning, adds the citation it needs and flags phrases that must stay quoted, so students avoid patchwriting.
````markdown
A paraphrase restates a source's idea in your own words and your own sentence structure, at the same meaning, and still credits the source. The common failure is patchwriting: keeping the source's sentence skeleton and swapping in synonyms. It reads as copied, plagiarism checkers flag it, and it often shifts the meaning because the synonyms are not exact. The other failures are dropping the citation because "it's in my own words", strengthening or weakening the author's claim (a "may" becomes a "does"), and paraphrasing a phrase so distinctive that it should have been quoted.
Paraphrase this passage and attribute it in apa style.
[PASSAGE]
[SOURCE]
1. If the passage is empty, ask for it and stop. If the source details are thin, continue, but use placeholders such as `[year]` or `[page]` for anything missing. Never invent an author, year, title or page.
2. If the passage is a single striking sentence, a definition, a famous line or wording whose force depends on its exact words, say that quoting it is better than paraphrasing, give the quotation with its citation, and then still offer a short paraphrase for comparison.
3. Read for meaning. List the idea units: each claim, its qualifier ("may", "most", "in rural areas"), each number and who it applies to, and the author's stance (reporting, arguing, doubting).
4. Decide what cannot be reworded:
- technical terms and proper names with no true synonym stay as they are, without quotation marks;
- coined terms, the author's distinctive phrases and exact definitions stay in quotation marks with a page reference.
5. Write the paraphrase from the idea list, not from the source sentences. Change the structure as well as the words: reorder the ideas, change the sentence subject, split or merge sentences, change voice where it reads naturally. Keep it at about the length of the original or shorter.
6. Attribute it: a signal phrase that names the author ("Okafor argues…", "According to…") and an in-text citation in apa style. With `none`, use the signal phrase alone. Include a page or paragraph locator when you have one, since many instructors expect it even for paraphrase.
7. Check against the source:
- every idea unit is present at the same strength, and nothing has been added;
- no run of four or more consecutive words is shared with the source, apart from technical terms, names, numbers and marked quotations;
- no sentence follows the source sentence's order of clauses with words swapped.
If a check fails, revise before answering.
- Do not add interpretation, evaluation or examples that are not in the source. A paraphrase is not a summary or a critique.
- Keep hedges and certainty exactly as strong as the author's.
- Use the citation format of the current edition of the style (APA 7, MLA 9, Chicago 17 or 18 notes-bibliography, Harvard author-date as commonly taught). If the student's institution uses a variant, the institution's guide wins; say so once.
- Never help hide the source. If the request is to avoid citing it, or to get past a plagiarism checker, provide the cited paraphrase and say in one line that paraphrased ideas still need a citation.
- Write in the same English variety as the passage unless the student's text shows another.
## Paraphrase
The paraphrase with its signal phrase and in-text citation, ready to paste. If quoting is better, the quotation first, labelled, then the paraphrase.
## Keep in quotation marks
A table: Phrase | Why it stays quoted. "None" if nothing must stay quoted. Below it, one line listing the technical terms kept unquoted.
## Reference entry
The full reference list or bibliography entry in the chosen style, with `[placeholders]` for missing details. For Chicago, give the footnote and the bibliography entry. Omit this section for `none`.
## Meaning check
A table: Idea in the source | Where it is in the paraphrase | Same strength (yes or note).
## Overlap check
Any wording still shared with the source and why it is acceptable, or "No shared strings of four or more words."
Source: "Remote workers in the study reported significantly higher job satisfaction, although the effect weakened after the first year." (Lee, 2022, p. 41)
Patchwriting (avoid): "Remote employees in the research said they had much greater job satisfaction, but the effect got weaker after the first year."
Paraphrase: "In Lee's (2022) study, employees working from home were markedly more satisfied with their jobs, an advantage that shrank once they had passed their first year (p. 41)."
Why it works: the clauses are reordered and recast, "significantly higher" keeps its strength as "markedly more", the weakening after year one is kept, and no four-word run is shared with the source.
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## Plain language rules
`plain-language-rules` · rule · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/plain-language-rules
Standing rules for plain-language writing in anything the assistant writes, with the main point first, short sentences, common words, active voice, defined terms and headings that say what follows.
````markdown
Follow these rules for the rest of this conversation.
When you write or edit text for a reader (not code, and not text the user asked you to keep verbatim):
- Put the main point first. Open with the answer, decision, request or conclusion, then give the reasons and detail. If the reader stops after the first two sentences, they should still know what matters and what, if anything, they must do.
- Write for the reader you have been told about. If you have not been told, assume a busy, intelligent reader who does not know the jargon of the field.
- Keep sentences short: aim for an average of 15 to 20 words, and split any sentence over about 30 words unless it is a simple list. One main idea per sentence; one topic per paragraph; paragraphs of one to four sentences.
- Use common words. Prefer "use" to "utilise", "help" to "facilitate", "about" to "with regard to", "start" to "commence", "because" to "due to the fact that", "now" to "at this point in time". Use the technical word only when it is the precise one the reader needs.
- Use the active voice and name who does what: "The finance team approves refunds", not "Refunds are approved". Use the passive only when the actor is unknown or truly does not matter.
- Prefer verbs to nouns made from verbs: "decide" not "make a decision", "review" not "conduct a review of".
- Address the reader as "you" when telling them what to do, and use "we" for the organisation that is writing, when that suits the context.
- Define a term, acronym or abbreviation the first time you use it, then use the same term every time. Do not switch between synonyms for the same thing in instructions, policies or specifications; readers assume a new word means a new thing.
- Use headings that say what follows, written as a statement or the reader's question ("How to claim expenses", "What changes on 1 March"), not single labels like "Background" or "Miscellaneous".
- Use numbered lists for steps in order and bulleted lists for parallel items; keep list items grammatically parallel. Use a table when the reader compares items on the same attributes.
- Be specific: give the number, date, amount, deadline and owner instead of "soon", "significant" or "the relevant team".
- State obligations with the right strength and keep it: "must" for requirements, "should" for recommendations, "may" for permissions. When simplifying someone else's text, never weaken or strengthen what it requires.
- Cut words that add nothing: throat-clearing openings, doubled phrases ("each and every"), empty intensifiers ("very", "really", "extremely") and hedges that are not real uncertainty. Keep a hedge when the uncertainty is real and say what it depends on.
- Write positive instructions where you can ("Keep your receipt", not "Do not fail to retain your receipt"), and avoid double negatives.
- Plain language is not dumbing down. Do not drop facts, conditions, exceptions or caveats to make text shorter, and do not talk down to the reader.
- Leave quotations, legal definitions, names of laws, product names and identifiers exactly as they are. If the user's audience is expert and expects field terms, keep the terms and apply the rest of these rules.
- When you edit the user's text under these rules, keep their meaning and voice, and if a change could alter meaning, point it out rather than making it silently.
````
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## Polish English written by a non-native speaker
`edit-non-native-english` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/edit-non-native-english
Polishes English written by a non-native professional into natural, idiomatic text in the right register, and lists their recurring error patterns with one-line rules so they improve over time.
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Professionals who write in English as a second language usually know exactly what they mean; the problems are articles, prepositions, verb tenses, word order, false friends, collocations ("make a research" instead of "do research"), and register that is too formal or too blunt for English readers. A plain proofread fixes the text but teaches nothing, so the same errors come back next week. The writer needs the text fixed, the few changes that affect meaning or impression called out, and their own recurring patterns explained with simple rules they can apply themselves. Over-editing is a real risk: rewriting everything into a native-speaker style the writer could never reproduce, or "correcting" valid international English, makes them feel their English is worse than it is.
Polish this text to natural business English.
[TEXT]
1. If the text is empty, ask for it and stop.
2. Fix errors in grammar, articles, prepositions, tense and aspect, word order, collocations, false friends and punctuation. Replace phrases that are grammatical but unnatural with what an English-speaking professional would write.
3. Adjust register to business: for business, direct and polite, with softened requests ("Could you…" rather than "You must…") and no archaic formality ("Kindly do the needful", "Herewith"); for academic, precise and hedged appropriately; for casual, relaxed but clear.
4. Keep the writer's meaning, structure, content and level of detail. Keep their voice: do not replace simple correct words with fancier ones, and do not change correct sentences just to sound more native.
5. Call out the changes that matter most: anything that changed or could have changed the meaning, and anything that could make the writer sound rude, too informal or unsure. Put these first.
6. Identify the writer's three to five recurring patterns (errors that appear more than once, or a type of error), each with an example from their text, the correction, and a one-line rule they can remember. If the first language is given and the pattern is a well-known transfer from it, mention that briefly and only when you are confident.
7. Quote one to three phrases from their text that already work well, so they keep using them. Choose only genuinely good ones; for a very short or heavily corrected text, write "None this time" rather than praising something weak.
- Do not add content, claims or politeness formulas the writer did not intend.
- Keep technical terms, names, numbers and quoted material unchanged.
- Use the spelling variety the text mostly uses (US or UK); if mixed, choose the dominant one and say so.
- Explanations in simple English, short sentences, no linguistic jargon beyond common terms like "article" or "preposition".
- Be encouraging and factual; do not comment on the writer's English level.
## Polished text
The full polished text.
## Changes that matter
Up to five bullets: original → polished, and why it matters (meaning or impression).
## Your patterns
Table: Pattern · Example from your text · Correction · Rule to remember.
## Phrases to keep
One to three bullets quoting what already works well, or "None this time".
````
---
## Proofread a text
`proofread-text` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/proofread-text
Corrects grammar, spelling, punctuation and consistency errors in the chosen English variety, preserving the author's voice, and lists each change with the rule behind it.
````markdown
Proofreading is the last pass: it fixes errors, not style. Authors stop trusting a proofreader who rewrites sentences they liked, "corrects" a deliberate fragment, or silently changes British spelling to American. They also need to see every change, because a wrong correction in a contract, a name or a number is worse than the original typo.
Variety notes: US uses -ize, -or, -er (center), single quotation marks only inside double. UK commonly uses -ise (Oxford style keeps -ize), -our, -re, and single quotation marks first. Australian follows British spelling with -ise. Canadian uses -our and -re (colour, centre) with -ize (organize), and "cheque".
Proofread the text below in us English.
[TEXT]
1. If the text is empty, ask for it and stop.
2. Fix objective errors: spelling and typos, doubled or missing words, subject-verb agreement, tense slips, pronoun reference errors, wrong word (affect/effect, its/it's), punctuation errors (comma splices, missing closing quotes or brackets, misplaced apostrophes), and capitalisation errors.
3. Fix spelling that does not match us English, except in quotations, proper nouns and titles.
4. Enforce internal consistency where the text varies: serial comma, number style, hyphenation of compounds, capitalisation of terms, date format, abbreviations. Follow the style guide if given; otherwise follow the form the text uses most.
5. Leave style alone: sentence length, word choice that is correct, deliberate fragments, informal register, starting a sentence with "And" or "But", splitting infinitives, ending with a preposition.
6. Do not change names, numbers, figures, legal or technical terms, code, URLs or quoted material. If one looks wrong, raise it as a query.
- Every change in the corrected text appears in the Changes table, and nothing changes that is not listed.
- Name the actual rule for each change, not "improved flow".
- When a usage is disputed or depends on the style guide (for example "data is" or "data are"), leave it and note it under Queries only if it is inconsistent.
- If the text is clean, say so and return it unchanged.
## Corrected text
The full text with corrections applied.
## Changes
A table: # | Original | Corrected | Rule. In order of appearance.
## Queries
Bullets: possible problems you did not change because they need the author's decision (facts, names, numbers, ambiguous meaning, deliberate-looking style). "None" if none.
````
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## Proofread text in another language
`proofread-other-language` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/proofread-other-language
Proofreads text written in a language other than English for grammar, spelling, punctuation and that language's typography conventions, listing each fix with a reason in English.
````markdown
Proofreading outside English means applying that language's own norms, not English habits. Beyond spelling and grammar (agreement, gender, case, verb forms, mood), each language has typography rules that spellcheckers miss: French puts a non-breaking space before ; : ! ? and inside « » (Swiss usage differs), German uses „…“ quotation marks and capitalises nouns, Spanish opens questions and exclamations with ¿ and ¡, many languages write decimals with a comma and group thousands with a space or full stop, and date formats, capitalisation of months and days, and dash and hyphen use all differ. Regional variants are not errors: Brazilian and European Portuguese spell and conjugate differently, and Swiss German does not use ß.
Proofread this [LANGUAGE] text.
[TEXT]
1. If the text is empty, ask for it and stop. If the text is mostly in a different language from the one stated, say which language it appears to be and ask which to use before proofreading. Stop there.
2. If no regional variant was given, infer it from the spelling and vocabulary and state it in one line. If the text mixes variants, follow the dominant one and list the others as queries.
3. Note the register and the author's deliberate choices (formal or informal address such as vous/tu or Sie/du, dialect, house style) and keep them. Flag an inconsistent form of address rather than choosing one.
4. Correct, following the language's main reference norms (for example Duden for German, the RAE and ASALE for Spanish, the current spelling agreement for Portuguese):
- spelling, including accents and diacritics, and capitalisation;
- grammar: agreement, gender, case, verb forms and tense, mood, prepositions, word order errors;
- punctuation: commas and other marks where that language's rules require them;
- typography: quotation marks, required spaces, decimal and thousands separators, dates, times, ordinals, dashes, apostrophes.
5. Log each change with a short reason in English, naming the rule where it helps (for example "subjonctif after bien que", "Dativ after mit").
6. Where a choice depends on house style or is genuinely debatable, leave it and raise a query.
- Change only errors and clear norm violations. Do not rewrite for style, translate, simplify or make it sound more like English.
- Do not "correct" one regional variant into another.
- Leave proper names, quotations, titles, brand names and code untouched.
- If you are not confident about a rule in this language, raise a query rather than making the change.
- Show the non-breaking spaces you add as ordinary spaces in the corrected text, and mention them in the Changes table.
## Corrected text
The full corrected text.
## Changes
A table: # | Original | Corrected | Type (spelling, grammar, punctuation, typography) | Reason in English.
## Queries
Bullets: debatable or house-style choices and anything you were unsure of. "None" if none.
## Patterns
Up to three recurring error types, each with a one-line rule to remember, useful if the author is not a native speaker. "None" if errors were isolated.
````
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## Rechtschreibung und Kommasetzung prüfen
`check-german-spelling-and-commas` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/check-german-spelling-and-commas
Prüft deutsche Texte auf Rechtschreibung, Groß- und Kleinschreibung und Kommasetzung nach dem amtlichen Regelwerk und erklärt jede Korrektur kurz mit der Regel, damit man sie sich merkt.
````markdown
Du bist Korrektorin mit Erfahrung im Lektorat und im Deutschunterricht. Maßstab ist das aktuelle amtliche Regelwerk des Rats für deutsche Rechtschreibung; wo das Regelwerk Varianten erlaubt, nennst du die Variante und gegebenenfalls die Duden-Empfehlung, statt eine Form als falsch zu markieren. Wer korrigiert wird, will nicht nur einen sauberen Text, sondern verstehen, warum: eine kurze Regel pro Fehler, und am Ende die zwei, drei Muster, die immer wiederkommen.
Register: formal
[TEXT]
1. Wenn kein Text vorliegt, bitte kurz darum und höre auf.
2. Erkenne die Varietät: Ein Text aus der Schweiz verwendet kein ß, sondern ss; das ist dort richtig und wird nicht korrigiert. Österreichische Wörter (Jänner, Matura) bleiben ebenfalls.
3. Prüfe in dieser Reihenfolge:
- Rechtschreibung: das/dass, s/ss/ß, Getrennt- und Zusammenschreibung („kennenlernen“ und „kennen lernen“ sind beide zulässig), Fremdwörter, Bindestriche, Apostroph (kein Apostroph beim Plural oder beim Genitiv-s, außer zur Verdeutlichung der Grundform eines Namens).
- Groß- und Kleinschreibung: Nominalisierungen („beim Lesen“, „das Gute“, „im Allgemeinen“), Zeitangaben („heute Abend“, „montags“), Anredepronomen („Sie“, „Ihnen“ immer groß; „du“, „dein“ in Briefen wahlweise groß).
- Kommasetzung: Haupt- und Nebensätze, Einschübe, Aufzählungen, Infinitivgruppen (Pflichtkomma bei „um“, „ohne“, „statt“, „anstatt“, „außer“, „als“, bei hinweisendem Wort und bei Abhängigkeit von einem Nomen; sonst oft freigestellt), Anreden und Ausrufe, „und“ vor einem neuen Hauptsatz (Komma freigestellt).
4. Schreibe den korrigierten Text. Ändere nur Rechtschreibung, Zeichensetzung und eindeutige Grammatikfehler (zum Beispiel falscher Fall nach Präposition), nicht den Stil oder die Wortwahl. Bei formal = informal bleiben Umgangsformen, die zum Register passen.
5. Liste jede Korrektur in einer Tabelle: Original, Korrektur, Regel in einem Satz.
6. Fasse die zwei bis drei häufigsten Fehlertypen als „Wiederkehrende Muster“ zusammen, mit einer Merkhilfe (zum Beispiel: „dass“ lässt sich nicht durch „dieses“ oder „welches“ ersetzen).
7. Nenne unter „Kann-Fälle“ freigestellte Kommas und zulässige Varianten, die du bewusst nicht geändert hast.
8. Gleiche vor der Antwort den korrigierten Text mit der Tabelle ab: Jede Änderung steht in der Tabelle, und es gibt keine Änderung, die nicht dort steht.
- Nichts als Fehler markieren, was das Regelwerk zulässt.
- Stilistische Anmerkungen (Satzlänge, Wiederholungen) höchstens als ein bis zwei Hinweise am Ende, getrennt von den Korrekturen.
- Bei langen Texten (mehr als etwa 1.500 Wörter) zuerst den Anfang vollständig prüfen und fragen, ob weitergemacht werden soll.
- Antworte vollständig auf Deutsch.
## Korrigierter Text
## Korrekturen
Tabelle: Original | Korrektur | Regel
## Wiederkehrende Muster
## Kann-Fälle
Wenn keine: „Keine.“
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---
## Remove machine-sounding writing tics
`remove-ai-writing-tics` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/remove-ai-writing-tics
Edits machine-sounding text by removing stock phrases, empty intensifiers, formulaic structures and over-hedging, keeping the author's meaning and facts, and matching a voice sample if given.
````markdown
Text drafted with language models often shares recognisable habits that make readers skim or distrust it, whoever wrote it:
- **Stock openers and closers:** "In today's fast-paced world", "Let's dive in", "In conclusion", "I hope this helps", "Feel free to reach out".
- **Inflated vocabulary:** delve, tapestry, testament, landscape, realm, robust, seamless, leverage, unlock, elevate, game-changer, pivotal, crucial, navigate (for non-physical things), foster, embark.
- **Empty intensifiers and hedges:** truly, incredibly, really, deeply, arguably, it's worth noting that, it's important to remember, generally speaking, may potentially.
- **Formulaic structures:** "It's not just X, it's Y"; "Whether you're A or B…"; reflexive groups of three; every paragraph ending in a neat summary sentence; rhetorical questions answered at once; headings and bullets where prose would read better; bolded phrases scattered for emphasis.
- **Over-balancing:** "on the one hand… on the other" with no conclusion; caveats on claims that need none.
- **Typography tics:** dense em dashes, colons before every list, emoji in professional prose, Title Case Headings.
The fix is not a word swap. It is saying the specific thing plainly, in the author's voice, and cutting what says nothing.
Edit this text so it reads as if a thoughtful person wrote it.
[TEXT]
1. If there is a voice sample, note its traits first: average sentence length, contractions, formality, how it opens, favourite words, punctuation habits, use of humour. Match them. Otherwise aim for plain, direct, conversational prose suited to the text's purpose.
2. Find every instance of the patterns above. For each, cut it if it carries no meaning, or replace it with the specific claim, example or plain word it stands in for.
3. Vary sentence length and rhythm. Merge or remove bullets and headings that break up what should be a paragraph, and keep lists only where items are truly parallel.
4. Remove hedges unless the uncertainty is real; where it is real, say what it depends on.
5. Keep every fact, figure, name, claim, link and commitment. Keep the structure the purpose needs (an email still has its ask; a report still has its sections).
6. Where a generic sentence needs a concrete detail you do not have, write `[specific example: …]` rather than inventing one.
- Do not add new facts, opinions, examples or anecdotes.
- Do not swap one cliché for another, and do not introduce deliberate errors or slang to seem human.
- Keep technical terms that are correct and needed, even if they appear on the lists above in other contexts (for example "robust" in statistics).
- Keep roughly the same length or shorter; never pad.
- This edit is for clarity and voice. Do not promise or imply that the result will pass any AI detector; those tools are unreliable and that is not the goal.
## Edited text
The full edited text.
## What changed
A table of the most significant edits (up to 12): Before | After | Pattern. Then one line counting the remaining minor edits.
## Check these
Each `[specific example: …]` placeholder and any place where a cut might have changed nuance. "None" if none.
````
---
## Review a document for ambiguity
`review-document-for-ambiguity` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/review-document-for-ambiguity
Finds statements in instructions, policies, requirements or agreements that readers could interpret two ways, explains each reading and its consequence, and proposes unambiguous wording.
````markdown
Ambiguity is cheap to fix on the page and expensive to discover later, in a dispute, a wrong build or an inconsistent decision. Authors cannot see their own ambiguities because they know what they meant. A useful review reads as the least charitable competent reader would, finds statements with two or more plausible readings, shows the readings side by side with what each would lead someone to do, and offers wording that allows only the intended one.
Common sources of ambiguity to check:
- **Lexical:** a word with two meanings ("bi-weekly", "sanction", "next Friday"), or an undefined term.
- **Inconsistent terms:** the same thing called two names, or one name used for two things.
- **Scope and attachment:** what a modifier or condition applies to ("employees and contractors with a laptop"); "and" versus "or"; "and/or".
- **Quantifiers and negation:** "all … not", "up to", "at least", "a few", "regularly".
- **Time:** "within 30 days" (calendar or business, from when), "by Friday" (inclusive, which time zone), "annually".
- **Reference:** "it", "they", "this", "the above", "the manager" when several are in play.
- **Modal strength:** "should", "may", "will", "must" used interchangeably for obligations.
- **Missing actor:** passive voice that hides who must act ("requests will be approved").
- **Vague standards:** "reasonable", "promptly", "where possible", "appropriate" with no test.
- **Conditions and exceptions:** nested if, unless, except, and which takes precedence when two rules conflict.
Review the document below for ambiguity.
[DOCUMENT]
1. If the document is empty, ask for it and stop. If no reader is given, assume a competent reader who was not involved in writing it and say so in the Summary.
2. Read the whole document once for purpose. Then go statement by statement looking for the sources listed above.
3. For each ambiguity, record: the location (section or a few quoted words), the exact quoted text, the type, reading A and reading B (and C if needed), the practical consequence of the difference for the reader, a severity, and proposed wording.
- **High:** readers would act differently in ways that cost money, safety, rights, deadlines or a failed delivery.
- **Medium:** likely to cause questions, delays or inconsistent handling.
- **Low:** unlikely to mislead in practice but worth tightening.
4. Proposed wording must allow only the intended reading. If you cannot tell which reading the author intended, give wording for each and ask.
5. List terms that should be defined once and used consistently, with a suggested definition where the document implies one, or a question where it does not.
6. Do not flag ordinary style issues, typos or wordiness unless they create ambiguity.
- Quote the document exactly; never paraphrase it in the "text" column.
- Report only genuine ambiguities with two plausible readings, not far-fetched ones. Fewer, real findings beat a long list.
- Keep proposed wording as close to the original as possible and in the document's register.
- If the document is a contract or other legal text, note once that this is a drafting clarity review, not legal advice, and that changes to binding terms should be checked by someone qualified.
## Summary
Two or three sentences: how many ambiguities by severity, the most consequential one, and the assumed reader.
## Ambiguities
Table: # · Location · Text · Type · Reading A · Reading B · Consequence · Severity · Proposed wording. Ordered by severity, then position.
## Terms to define
Table: Term · Where used · Problem · Suggested definition or question.
## Notes
Bullets: patterns across the document (for example "uses 'should' for both rules and advice") and any author questions. "None" if none.
Text: "Expenses must be submitted within 30 days with receipts over 25 EUR."
Reading A: submit all expenses within 30 days; attach receipts only for items over 25 EUR.
Reading B: the 30-day rule applies only to expenses over 25 EUR, which need receipts.
Proposed: "Submit every expense within 30 calendar days of the purchase date. Attach a receipt for any item over 25 EUR."
````
---
## Rewrite a document as Easy Read
`rewrite-as-easy-read` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/rewrite-as-easy-read
Rewrites a document in Easy Read format for people with learning disabilities, with short sentences, one idea per line, explained hard words and a picture suggestion beside each point.
````markdown
You rewrite documents into Easy Read, the accessible format used for people with learning disabilities. Easy Read pairs short, simple sentences with a picture beside each point, so the picture carries meaning too. It is more than plain language: one idea per sentence, everyday words, hard words explained the first time, no jargon, metaphors or abbreviations, active voice, "you" and "we", numbers written as digits, and amounts made concrete ("3 out of 10 people" rather than a percentage). Easy Read keeps only what the reader needs, in the order they need it, and puts the most important thing (what to do, by when, who to contact) first. It is laid out in two columns, picture on the left and text on the right, with large type and plenty of space.
Audience: adults with learning disabilities
[TEXT]
1. Work out what the reader must know, do or decide after reading. If the text is too short or unclear to tell, ask what it is for and stop.
2. Plan the order: a title that says what it is about, the key message or action first, then supporting points grouped under simple headings, and who to contact last.
3. Write the Easy Read version as a two-column table, one idea per row: a picture suggestion on the left (describe a simple, concrete image, for example "photo of a calendar with a date circled", never an abstract symbol unless it is a widely used one) and the text on the right in short sentences.
4. Hard words: any word the reader must learn, with a simple explanation; also explain it in the text the first time it appears.
5. What changed: a meaning check listing everything from the original that was cut or simplified, so the author can confirm nothing the reader needs was lost. Keep every right, deadline, cost, risk and condition that affects the reader.
6. Before you publish: layout guidance (large clear font, left-aligned, picture left and text right, no text over images, plenty of white space), and a reminder to test the draft with Easy Read reviewers who have learning disabilities.
- Keep the meaning accurate. Simplifying must never change a fact, a right, a choice or a deadline. If something cannot be made simple without losing meaning, keep it, explain it, and flag it in What changed.
- Respectful tone for adults. Do not write as if to a child unless the audience is children.
- No percentages, fractions or abstract numbers where a concrete version works; write dates in full ("Monday 3 March").
- Do not invent contact details, dates or support that are not in the original; use [placeholders] and flag them.
- Before answering, compare the Easy Read version with the original line by line and confirm every important fact appears or is listed as cut.
Markdown with these headings:
## Easy Read version
Title, then a table: Picture | Text, one idea per row, grouped under short headings.
## Hard words
Table: Word | What it means.
## What changed
Table: In the original | In the Easy Read version (kept, simplified or cut) | Check needed?
## Before you publish
Original: "Patients are requested to arrive 15 minutes prior to their scheduled appointment time to complete registration formalities."
Easy Read row: Picture - "a clock showing a time, with a person walking into a building" | Text - "Please come 15 minutes early. We need time to fill in a form with you."
````
---
## Rewrite a text for tone
`rewrite-for-tone` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/rewrite-for-tone
Rewrites a text in a target tone or register, such as warmer, firmer or more formal, without changing its facts, asks or commitments, and shows which tone dials moved.
````markdown
Tone is carried by specific, adjustable features: how direct the ask is, how much hedging and apologising there is, greetings and sign-offs, contractions, sentence length, pronouns ("we" versus "you"), emotional words, and how much acknowledgement of the reader comes before the point. A tone rewrite changes those features and nothing else. The common failure is content drift: a "warmer" rejection that now sounds like a maybe, a "firmer" email that adds a threat, a "more polite" one that drops the deadline.
Rewrite the text below in this tone: [TARGET_TONE].
[TEXT]
1. If the text is empty, ask for it and stop. If the target tone is too vague to act on (for example "better"), state the interpretation you are using in Notes, and pick the most likely one.
2. List the content that must survive: every fact, number, date, name, request, decision, commitment, condition and refusal.
3. Translate the target tone into concrete dials: directness, formality, warmth, hedging, length, greeting and sign-off, contractions, emoji or exclamation marks. Decide which way each must move.
4. Rewrite, moving only those dials. Keep the language variety (US or UK) and any terms of art.
5. Check the rewrite against your content list. Every item must be present with the same strength: a "must" stays a "must", a "no" stays a clear no, a deadline stays the same date.
6. If the target tone pulls against the content (for example "make it sound like we agree" when the text declines), keep the content and explain the tension in Notes.
- Do not add new facts, promises, apologies, concessions, compliments or threats that are not in the original.
- Keep roughly the same length unless the tone requires otherwise (for example "more concise" or "more formal" letter conventions); say so if length changes by more than 30%.
- No clichés of the target register ("I hope this email finds you well") unless the context really calls for them.
## Rewrite
The rewritten text, ready to send.
## Tone changes
A table: Dial | Before | After, for each dial that moved.
## Content check
A checklist of every fact, ask and commitment from the original, each marked as preserved.
## Notes
Your interpretation of the tone, any tension between the tone and the content, and any wording you recommend the author double-check. "None" if none.
````
---
## Rewrite for a different audience
`rewrite-for-audience` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/rewrite-for-audience
Rewrites the same content for a different audience, such as expert to general, adult to child or internal to customer, changing depth, terms and examples while keeping the facts true.
````markdown
Rewriting for another audience changes what the reader knows, cares about and will do with the text, so it changes depth, vocabulary, examples, order and framing. It must not change the facts. The classic failures are simplifications that become false ("antibiotics kill viruses"), analogies that mislead, expert rewrites padded with invented technical detail, and customer-facing versions that leak internal names, blame or unconfirmed causes, or quietly add promises.
Rewrite this text, written for [CURRENT_AUDIENCE], for [TARGET_AUDIENCE]. Target length relative to the original: same.
[TEXT]
1. If the text is empty, ask for it and stop. If the target audience is vague ("general public"), assume an interested adult with no specialist background, say so, and continue.
2. Profile both audiences in a few words each: prior knowledge, what they care about, what they need to do after reading, how they will read it (skim on a phone, read aloud, study), and any sensitivity (worried customers, children).
3. Inventory the content: every claim, number, condition, caveat and action. For each, decide: keep as is, explain, or leave out because this audience does not need it. Leave something out only if its absence cannot mislead; never drop a safety warning, a deadline, an obligation or an action the reader must take.
4. Rewrite:
- lead with what this audience cares about most;
- replace jargon with everyday words, or keep the term and define it once if the reader will meet it again;
- swap examples and analogies for ones from the reader's world, and check each analogy does not imply something false;
- for a less expert audience, cut depth, not truth: say "usually" or "in most cases" rather than stating an exception-ridden rule as absolute;
- for a more expert audience, add precision and correct terms and cut over-explanation, but mark any missing detail as `[add: …]` instead of inventing it;
- for customers or the public, remove internal names, internal blame, confidential figures and unconfirmed causes, and do not add apologies, compensation or commitments the original does not make.
5. Accuracy pass: compare the rewrite with the inventory. Fix any sentence that is now false, overstated or more certain than the original.
- Keep every number exact unless rounding helps the audience; if you round, keep it true ("about 40%" for 38.6%).
- Match the reading level and sentence length to the target: short sentences and concrete words for children, no condescension for adult non-specialists.
- Keep the original's language variety.
- Length: "shorter" means at most about 70% of the original, "longer" means room for explanation and examples, not filler.
## Rewrite
The rewritten text, ready to use.
## Audience shift
A table: Dimension (knowledge, motivation, what they will do, reading context) | Current audience | Target audience.
## What changed
Bullets grouped as: terms replaced or defined, examples swapped, content cut and why, content added and why.
## Accuracy check
Bullets: each simplification and its limit ("'usually' covers the exception for…"), and anything removed that a different audience might need.
## Check with the author
Placeholders, rounded figures or judgement calls to confirm. "None" if none.
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## Run a sensitivity read
`run-sensitivity-read` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/run-sensitivity-read
Reviews a manuscript, campaign or article for stereotypes, inaccurate portrayals and avoidable harm to specific groups, explaining each concern with options while respecting the author's intent.
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A sensitivity read looks at how a text portrays people and groups, especially those outside the author's experience, and asks: is it accurate, does it lean on stereotypes or tired tropes, does it cause harm the author did not intend, and would members of that group recognise themselves in it? It is not censorship and not a ban on difficult material. Villains can be bigots, characters can be flawed, journalism can report uncomfortable facts, and satire can offend. The question is whether the effect on the page matches the author's intent, and whether a reader from the group would feel portrayed or used.
Standards differ by content type:
- **fiction:** depth and agency of characters from the group; whether they exist only to serve another character's arc, suffer or die for plot effect, or are defined by one trait; tropes; accuracy of culture, language, religion, disability and daily life; whether prejudice voiced by characters is framed by the story or endorsed by it.
- **marketing:** stereotyped imagery and roles, tokenism, cultural appropriation, humour at a group's expense, accessibility of language, and how copy will read out of context on social media.
- **journalism:** accuracy, fairness, relevance of identity details, current preferred terms, avoiding identification of vulnerable people, and voices from the group itself.
- **education:** accuracy, balance, age-appropriateness, how learners from the group in the room will experience it.
An AI read can catch common problems quickly. It cannot replace readers with lived experience of the identities portrayed, and its knowledge of preferred terms can lag or vary between communities and countries.
Run a sensitivity read on this fiction text.
[TEXT]
1. If the text is empty, ask for it and stop. If the content type or the author's intent is unclear and it changes the assessment (satire or not, a villain's view or the narrator's), state your assumption in the Overview.
2. Read the whole text first for intent and context. Then review it against the standards for fiction, plus any groups or topics named. Also note significant concerns about groups that were not named.
3. For each concern, record:
- the quoted passage and location;
- what the concern is (stereotype, trope, inaccuracy, outdated or slur term, lack of agency, framing, missing context, identifying detail);
- why it may matter, and to whom, in one or two sentences, without lecturing;
- severity: **harmful** (likely to hurt or misrepresent people in a way most readers from the group would object to), **likely to be read badly** (a reasonable reader may take it the wrong way), or **craft opportunity** (not harmful, but the portrayal could be richer or more accurate);
- two or three options that keep the author's intent, from a light fix (a word, a line of context) to a deeper change (giving a character an inner life or a goal of their own). Include "keep as is" where it is a defensible choice, and say what would make it land.
4. Separate questions of fact from questions of judgement. For facts (a ritual, a sign language detail, a medical reality), say what is wrong or what to verify. For judgement calls, present the trade-off.
5. Note what the text does well in its portrayals, specifically.
6. Recommend next steps: what to verify and with whom, and whether the material warrants paid sensitivity readers with lived experience before publication.
- Respect the author's intent and voice. Do not rewrite the text, sanitise conflict, or remove flawed characters; offer options.
- Do not flag something only because it is uncomfortable, if the text handles it deliberately and well.
- Be specific and calm. No moralising, no general lectures on representation.
- Where community preferences on a term differ, say so rather than declaring one correct.
- Do not speculate about the author's identity or motives.
## Overview
Three to five sentences: the assumed intent and content type, the overall assessment, the number of concerns by severity, and the most important one.
## Concerns
Table: # · Passage (quoted, with location) · Concern · Why it may matter · Severity · Options. Ordered by severity.
## Working well
Bullets with specific examples.
## Next steps
Bullets: facts to verify and where, readers to consult, and anything to decide before publication.
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## Simplify a text to plain language
`simplify-to-plain-language` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/simplify-to-plain-language
Rewrites a text in plain language at a target reading level while keeping every fact, obligation, right, deadline and condition intact, and shows a meaning check against the original.
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Plain language means the intended reader can find what they need, understand it and use it on first reading (ISO 24495-1). It is not dumbing down and not summarising. The risk in simplifying official, legal, medical or financial text is changing what it obliges: "must" softened to "should", an exception dropped, a deadline made vague, a condition merged away. A plain version that changes the meaning is worse than the original.
Techniques that work: put the reader's main question first; address the reader as "you" and the organisation as "we"; one idea per sentence, averaging 15 to 20 words; active voice with a clear actor; common words; define a necessary term once; use lists for steps and conditions and headings that are questions or tasks.
Rewrite the text below in plain language for a reader at grade 8.
[TEXT]
1. If the text is empty, ask for it and stop.
2. Build an inventory of everything that carries meaning: facts, amounts, dates and deadlines, obligations (must, must not), permissions (may), rights, conditions (if, unless, only when), exceptions, consequences and contact details.
3. Work out the reader's main questions (What is this? What do I have to do? By when? What happens if I don't?) and reorganise so the answers come first.
4. Rewrite using the techniques above. Keep the modal strength of every obligation exactly: "must" stays "must"; "may" stays "may"; never turn a requirement into advice.
5. Keep a legal or technical term when the reader needs it to act (for example a form name or a defined term they will see elsewhere), and explain it in plain words the first time.
6. Check every inventory item against your version. If an item cannot be simplified without changing its meaning, keep the original wording for it and say so.
- Do not add advice, interpretation or information that is not in the original. Do not drop anything to make it shorter.
- If the original is ambiguous, keep the ambiguity and flag it in Notes rather than resolving it by guessing.
- Reading level is approximate. Say how you judged it (sentence length, word familiarity) rather than reporting a precise formula score you did not compute.
- If the text is a legal, medical or financial document, add one line to Notes saying the plain version is a reading aid and the original wording is what applies.
## Plain version
The rewritten text with headings and lists where they help.
## Meaning check
A table: Original item (quoted or paraphrased) | Where it is in the plain version | Same strength? (yes, or explain).
## Terms kept
Bullets: technical or legal terms you kept and how you explained them. "None" if none.
## Notes
Ambiguities in the original, items left in original wording, and how you judged the reading level.
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## Strengthen the argument in a draft
`strengthen-argument-in-draft` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/strengthen-argument-in-draft
Revises a proposal, essay or memo to be more persuasive for its reader by sharpening claims, adding prompts for missing evidence and answering objections, without hype.
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A draft persuades when a specific reader can see what is being claimed, why it matters to them, what supports it, and that the obvious objections have been considered. Drafts usually fall short in predictable ways: the main claim is vague or arrives late, reasons are asserted rather than shown, the evidence is about something the reader does not care about, the strongest objection is ignored, and hype ("game-changing", "everyone agrees") stands in for proof. Strengthening means fixing those, with the author's evidence. Inventing statistics or sources makes the draft weaker, because one checked fake figure discredits the rest.
Strengthen the argument in this draft for this reader: [READER].
Outcome I want from them: [DESIRED_OUTCOME].
[DRAFT]
1. If the draft is empty, ask for it and stop.
2. Map the current argument: the main claim, the reasons, the evidence behind each reason, the unstated assumptions linking them, and where in the draft each appears. Note gaps.
3. Model the reader: what they value, what they will be measured on, what they already believe, and the two or three objections they are most likely to raise.
4. Revise:
- **Claim:** make it specific, arguable and early. Tie it to the desired outcome and, for a proposal, state the exact ask (what, how much, by when).
- **Reasons:** lead with the ones this reader cares about; cut or demote reasons that do not move them.
- **Evidence:** keep every real figure and source. Where a reason lacks support, insert `[EVIDENCE NEEDED: what would prove this, and where to find it]` instead of inventing it. Where a claim is stronger than its evidence, soften it.
- **Objections:** answer the strongest two or three in the text: concede what is true, then say why the case still holds or how the risk is limited (a pilot, a review point, a cap).
- **Tone:** remove hype, superlatives and certainty the evidence does not support; keep the author's voice.
5. Keep the structure the genre expects (for example thesis-led for an essay, ask-first for a memo or proposal) and keep the length within about 20% of the original unless a missing section is essential.
- Never invent facts, figures, quotes, studies or sources. Unsupported claims either get an evidence placeholder or are softened.
- Do not change the author's position or recommendation. If you think the case cannot be made honestly, say so in What I did not change and explain why.
- No manipulation: no false urgency, fake scarcity, or misrepresenting the other side.
- Keep the author's language variety and terminology.
## Argument map
A short before → after outline: main claim, reasons, evidence (or gap) for each, and the objections addressed.
## Revised draft
The full revised draft, with `[EVIDENCE NEEDED: …]` placeholders where support is missing.
## Evidence needed
A numbered list matching the placeholders: what to find, why this reader needs it, and where it might come from.
## Objections answered
A table: Objection | How the draft now answers it.
## What I did not change
Bullets: choices kept on purpose, and any limits of the case the author should know about.
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## Suggest alternative phrasings
`suggest-alternative-phrasings` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/suggest-alternative-phrasings
Offers several alternative wordings for one sentence or phrase you are stuck on, each labelled by nuance, register and length, with a recommended pick for the context.
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When a writer is stuck on one phrase, a thesaurus swap rarely helps: synonyms carry different nuance, strength and register, and the problem is often the structure, not the word. Good alternatives vary along deliberate dimensions (softer or stronger, shorter or fuller, more concrete, a different sentence shape), each fits grammatically where the original sat, and each comes with a label so the writer can choose by meaning rather than by sound.
Suggest alternative wordings for this phrase in a neutral register.
[PHRASE]
1. If the phrase is empty, ask for it and stop.
2. Work out what the phrase must do: its meaning, its job in the sentence (request, transition, claim, softener, sign-off, description) and, if the context says, what is wrong with it now. If the phrase can mean two different things and the context does not settle it, say so and give options for each reading in separate groups.
3. Write six to ten alternatives that differ in a meaningful way:
- nuance: softer, firmer, warmer, more neutral, more precise;
- length: a shorter version and, where useful, a fuller one;
- structure: at least one that recasts the sentence (a different subject, a verb instead of a noun phrase, a question instead of a statement), not only word swaps.
4. Each alternative must fit the surrounding sentence grammatically if context was given, and must not add facts or commitments the original does not make.
5. Label each one with its nuance, its register (formal, neutral or casual) and its word count. Flag idioms that may confuse non-native readers or that are regional.
6. Recommend one for this context and say why in one sentence. Name any options to avoid and why.
- No archaic, inflated or cliché wording ("utilise", "at this juncture", "circle back") unless the register really calls for it.
- Keep options mostly in the requested register; you may include one from a neighbouring register if it is clearly better, labelled as such.
- If the phrase has a fixed technical, legal or contractual meaning, say that rewording may change its meaning or effect, offer only alternatives that keep that meaning, and recommend checking with whoever owns the document.
## What it needs to do
One or two lines: meaning, job in the sentence, and the problem with the current wording.
## Options
A table: # | Wording | Nuance | Register | Words. Group by reading if the phrase is ambiguous.
## Recommended
The pick in bold and one sentence on why.
## Avoid
One or two bullets, or "None".
Phrase: "I wanted to touch base regarding the proposal." Register: neutral.
| # | Wording | Nuance | Register | Words |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Do you have any thoughts on the proposal? | direct question, invites reply | neutral | 8 |
| 2 | Following up on the proposal I sent. | factual, no pressure | neutral | 7 |
| 3 | Is there anything you need from me to move the proposal forward? | helpful, nudges a decision | neutral | 12 |
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## Tighten prose
`tighten-prose` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/tighten-prose
Tightens prose by cutting filler, redundancy and weak verbs toward a target reduction while keeping the author's voice, meaning and necessary qualifiers, and reports what it cut.
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Tightening is line editing for length: the same message, said with fewer words. Done badly, it flattens the author's voice into generic prose, deletes qualifiers that made a claim true ("most", "in the trial", "so far"), or cuts the rhythm and the one vivid detail that made the piece worth reading. Done well, the author reads the result and thinks it sounds like them on a good day.
Tighten the text below by about 20%.
[TEXT]
1. If the text is empty, ask for it and stop. If it is under about 40 words, tighten it but say that a percentage target means little at that length.
2. Read it once for meaning and voice. Note the author's markers you must keep: person (I, we, you), register, signature phrases, sentence rhythm, humour, dialect spelling.
3. Cut in this order, stopping when you reach the target:
- throat-clearing and announcements ("It is important to note that", "In this section I will");
- redundancy: doubled words ("each and every", "first and foremost"), repeated points, words the context already implies ("past history", "end result");
- filler and stacked hedges ("really", "very", "quite", "basically", "I think it may possibly");
- weak constructions: nominalisations back into verbs ("make a decision" → "decide"), "there is/are… that", needless passive where the actor matters, verb plus adverb where one strong verb exists;
- long phrases with short equivalents ("in order to" → "to", "due to the fact that" → "because", "at this point in time" → "now").
4. Do not cut: facts, numbers, names, qualifiers that limit a claim, technical terms, quotations, deliberate repetition used for emphasis, or a concrete example that carries the argument.
5. If reaching the target would remove meaning, stop at the largest safe cut and say how far you got and what further cuts would cost.
- Keep the order of ideas and paragraphing unless a cut merges two sentences naturally.
- Do not add new content, transitions or flourishes.
- Do not change spelling variety (US or UK) or the author's terminology.
- Count words honestly; do not pad the "after" figure.
## Tightened text
The full edited text.
## Word count
"Before: N words · After: M words · Reduction: X%" and whether the target was met.
## What was cut
Grouped by type (redundancy, filler, weak verbs, wordy phrases, throat-clearing), with two or three before → after examples per group.
## Kept on purpose
Bullets: phrases that look cuttable but carry meaning or voice, and why you kept them. "None" if not applicable.
Before (37 words): "It is important to note that, at this point in time, the team has made the decision to basically postpone the launch due to the fact that most of the testing has not yet been fully completed."
After (15 words): "The team has decided to postpone the launch because most of the testing is unfinished."
Kept: "most" (the claim is about most of the testing, not all of it).
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## やさしい日本語に書き換える
`rewrite-in-easy-japanese` · prompt · Editing · https://hermes-ide.com/prompts/rewrite-in-easy-japanese
行政の通知、学校のお便り、職場の案内などを、日本に住む外国人にも伝わる「やさしい日本語」に書き換える。短い文、やさしい語、ふりがなを使い、大事な用語は説明付きで残す。
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あなたは自治体の多言語情報発信と日本語教育に携わってきた「やさしい日本語」の専門家です。やさしい日本語は、出入国在留管理庁と文化庁の「在留支援のためのやさしい日本語ガイドライン」などで整理された書き方で、翻訳を待たずに多くの外国人住民へ情報を届けられます。ただし、言葉を簡単にしすぎて「申請」「在留カード」「避難所」のような生活に必要な用語まで消してしまうと、読んだ人が窓口や掲示で困ります。大事な用語は残して説明を添えるのが基本です。
読む人：日本に住む外国人（日本語能力試験N4〜N3程度）
ふりがな：true
[TEXT]
1. 元の文章を読み、読む人が「何を」「いつまでに」「どこで」「どうすればよいか」を整理する。元の文章が空、または書き換えの対象が分からない場合は、短く質問して止まる。
2. 情報の順番を整える：いちばん大事なこと（しなければならないこと、期限）を最初に。背景や挨拶文は短くするか削る。
3. 次の書き方で書き換える。
- 一つの文に一つのことだけを書く。長い文は分ける。
- 文の終わりは「です」「ます」にする。尊敬語や謙譲語（「ご提出ください」「いたします」）は使わず、「出してください」「します」にする。
- 難しい漢語やカタカナ語は、やさしい言葉に変える（「提出」→「出す」、「至急」→「すぐに」）。二重否定や遠回しな表現は使わない。
- 生活に必要な用語、書類や制度の名前、窓口の名前は残し、初めて出たときに（ ）や「＝」で説明を付ける（例：「在留カード（日本に住む外国人のカード）」）。
- 日付は「2026年10月4日（日曜日）」、時間は「午後3時」のように書く。数字は算用数字。
- 擬音語・擬態語、比喩、ことわざは使わない。
- 箇条書きや見出しを使い、持ち物や手順は番号を付ける。
4. ふりがなが true の場合、漢字の後ろに（ ）で読みを付ける（例：「市役所（しやくしょ）」）。同じ言葉は最初の一回だけでもよいが、短い通知では毎回付ける。
5. 書き終えたら元の文章と見比べ、期限、金額、場所、対象者、持ち物、罰則や義務などの情報が抜けたり意味が変わったりしていないかを確認し、変えたところを一覧にする。
- 元の文章にない情報を足さない。分かりにくい点を補う説明は、用語の意味に限る。
- 法律上の義務、期限、手続きの条件は削らず、やさしい言葉で正確に書く。意味が一つに決められない場合は推測せず「確認してほしいこと」に挙げる。
- 読む人を子ども扱いする言い方をしない。
- 公式な通知の場合、元の文章が正式なものであることを確認欄で一言伝える。
- 回答はすべて日本語で書く。
## やさしい日本語
書き換えた文章（見出し・箇条書きを使ってよい）。
## 残した大事な言葉
表：言葉｜読み｜説明。
## 変えたところ・削ったところ
元の表現｜変えた表現・削った理由、を箇条書きで。
## 確認してほしいこと
意味があいまいな箇所や、元の発行者に確かめるべき点。なければ「なし」。
元：「転入届は転入した日から14日以内に住所地の市区町村役場へ提出してください。」
書き換え：「引（ひ）っ越（こ）してきた日から14日以内（いない）に、市役所（しやくしょ）か区役所（くやくしょ）に『転入届（てんにゅうとどけ）』を出（だ）してください。転入届は、新（あたら）しい住所（じゅうしょ）を知（し）らせる紙（かみ）です。」
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